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(Name) sat alone in the middle of a field of sunflowers. It was break time and instead of hanging around with all the other workers she preferred sitting alone.

Well... even thought at the moment she did look a lot like a boy. She's shoved on a large hat to keep her hair invisible and wore a large coat. Overall, she didn't look much like a girl. Except maybe her face which she usually kept hidden. Even though today it was very warm and sunny, she had no choice but to stay hidden.

The job she worked in was a 'men only' so she had been forced to change how she looked. It was lead by a man named Ivan Braginski. Most of the time (Name) preferred to avoid the man in-case he figured something out.

There was a sound behind name. She glanced back, at the same time shoving her hat lower over her face. It was Ivan. Her boss.

"Ah, someone else who enjoys sunflowers." Her boss smiled at her.

"Y-yes sir." (Name) mumbled, trying to deepen her voice. Her boss stared at her for a bit.

"Aren't you warm under all that?" (Name) shook her head quickly.

"Hmmm.... well, break-time is over, go and join the others, da?" (Name) nodded and stood up clumsily. Ivan tried to look under the hat, crouching down a little. (Name) looked away. Blast that stupid idiot. He knows something. (Name) gulped and shoved her hands in her pocket.

"So, what was your name again?" Her boss asked, catching up to her in a few strides.

"Er... urm (False Boy Name)" (Name) muttered. Ivan looked at her.

"Hmm... doesn't suit you." (Name) shrugged, causing him to frown a little.

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The main job for (Name)'s sector was to transport bricks to create large buildings. Every man, and (Name),  had to carry bricks over their shoulders and take them to the builders. It was a hard job and every day, (Name) feared of her disguise failing her. Not only her disguise for being a boy but as an undiscovered country, hiding in the shadows. Even though she knew sooner or later she'd be caught.

That particular day, (Name) had a large disadvantage. The fact that she was so wrapped up in a blazing day. For the first few hours everything went smoothly. (Name) could feel that today she was being watched a bit more carefully.

Around her the men talked, rolling up their sleeves or taking off their shirts to reveal only a vest. But (Name) couldn't so that. Just as she was carrying her second to last pile of bricks her foot caught onto a sunflower weed.

The next second she was tumbling down the small hill beside her. Not able to do anything. Her breath smashed out of her in every roll. At last the nightmare of a ride stopped. A small groan escaped her lips, above her she could hear the sounds of muttering. (Name) started trying to push herself up.

"Don't move, da?" A quite voice ordered from above her, she was lifted up on the persons shoulders as if she weighted nothing.

She was doomed.

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The room was lit with sunlight, (Name) was put on a chair opposite a desk. She realized that she was in Ivan's office. A vase with a single sunflower was propped on the desk.

"That was quite an accident." Her boss stared at her. He didn't know what to do when someone was injured. Usually, he wouldn't really care or care enough to fire them on the spot, but today he had done differently. He frowned a little and took out a book written in Russian.

"Remove your over-coat, I need to check for any injuries." He continued and glanced at her. (Name) froze.

"I-I'm fine sir." She gulped, staring down. Thought she didn't feel fine, her body ached all over. Ivan frowned again. He bent down.

"I did not ask, I ordered, do not make me repeat myself, da?" He smiled a small, quite scary, smile at her. (Name) preferred him frowning. She gulped.

"I-I'll just roll my sleeves up" She tried again. Ivan stared at her. Nobody tried to question him more then once. But she seemed different, everything she did made her seem almost like...

"Take your hat off." He smiled at her, the room's temperature dropping a few degrees.

"U-um what sir?" (Name) squeaked. A small flash passed Ivan's eyes, without asking he grabbed her chin and lifted her face up. A silence passed the room. (Name) tried to tear her face away but her bosses grip just tightened.

"Your a girl." Her boss muttered.

"S-sir." (Name) tried to stand up. Her boss pushed her back down keeping his hands on her shoulders.

"So you lied to me sunflower?" Ivan smiled at her.

"I..." (Name) leaned back, tying to wriggle herself out of his grip. She nodded.

"I don't like liars." Her boss smiled at her again. "Did you know that, sunflower?" (Name) stared at him, fearfully. "You know what happens to liars?" He boss continued and tilted her head so that she was looking up again. (Name) gulped. "They get punished. So what do you think I should do to you?"

"I don't know sir" (Name) whispered, looking almost tearful. Her boss straightened up.

"You will get fired from this job," Ivan concluded, staring down at her. (Name) stared at her hands. "Not only that but you will, from now on, be working in my household instead. Da?" (Name) blinked.

"I don't want to thanks." She sniffled. The worst thing that could happen now was her boss being a powerful country. (Like Russia maybe?) If that was to happen then... she'd be even more doomed. Meanwhile, her boss completely ignored what she had said.

"Go pack up-"

"Sir I don't want to." (Name) interrupted. Her boss blinked, he'd been interrupted. within a second he'd pulled lifted (Name) clean off her feet using the cuff of her overcoat and pushed her onto a wall.

"First of all. Never interrupt me, sunflower" He smiled at her. (Name) tried to push him back, it was no use.

"Secondly, I didn't give you a choice" Ivan said quietly, pushing back with a little more force. "Da?" (Name) tried to take in some air, but he was almost suffocating her. She nodded, her face turning red from lack of air.

"S-sir I can't bre-" Again, Ivan ignored her.

"Thirdly, from now on you will call me 'master'." He let go, seeing that (Name's) grip was loosening. leaving (Name) gasping for air. "Aren't you going to thank me for giving you a job, Little Sunflower?" (Name) clenched her teeth. At the moment she knew she wouldn't last against him. "You should be happy, any other man over here wouldn't have given you a job if he found out you were a little girl." (Name) pushed herself up.

"..."

"Tomorrow meet me here with anything you need, you will not need clothes, I can provide you with that." Ivan continued. "Any other secrets, sunflower?" He asked. (Name) shook her head. "Well, I will tell you then, some people might call me Russia, I am it's personification." (Name) froze. This guy was Russia? If he found out she was a little country...she gulped. "So don't try to run because you know, you won't be able to, and if you do..." He stared at her. "You will be punished severely. You can go now sunflower." He smiled at (Name). (The smile on the picture!)

(Name) gulped, she was dead.

Sooo should this continue? I need feedback! My other fan-fictions will continue, this is just... one I promised to do. Russia is quite evil here.


Ok, this is a Russia X Reader even though reader seems to hate Russia at the momento... ok then! Hope you like it
:iconrussiaplz: :iconsaysplz: Become one with Russia?
You: :iconsaysplz: No.
:iconrussiasmileplz::iconsaysplz: it was an order


Hetalia does not belong to me! Er neither do you?

Update

I really did not expect this feedback! Thankyou :iconblushplz:

Also if you like this fanfiction and are waiting for the second part you'll love this RussiaXReader :> Trust me it's awesome! (The theme is similar so you'll like it!)
[link]

Chapter 2:[link]
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:iconholothewolfgaming:
HoloTheWolfGaming Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
Me:To bad russia btw im a contrey x3 *grabs ak47* and my contrey ain't goin down
Ivan(Russia):Oh Sh*t.
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gab226789 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Student Writer
o///o um......okay........er........I REGRET NOTHING!!!!!!

Joon: Bitch Please Im Fabulous XD 
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:iconnekomariakisami-chan:
NekoMariaKisami-Chan Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I love it!! =w=
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DaisyGirl3000 Featured By Owner May 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I think you should definitely continue. Which I can see you have already, but still. :P Thought I'd let you know. haha.
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ParaTheImp Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I like this already. At least the reader isn't so cocky....At least she IS frightened instead of 'I can mouth off all I want~!' Thank god for this story! :3 Keep doing this story! I really wanna see how far this story can go~!
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LunaAngel-Eclipse Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Are you the same author of the 'king' one? Because that one is awesome, and while waiting for the next update, i'm reading this. Wich is also very cool.
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KiraWolf54 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
When I looked at the picture.... Oh my.... Shouko-Blush (Baka to test) Shouko-Blush (Baka to test) 
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:iconlunaangel-eclipse:
LunaAngel-Eclipse Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
i'll become 1 with u! u just need some love n affection, u amazing country, u.
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:iconpockeydocterchu:
pockeydocterchu Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I would become one with Russia too! ^3^ He's cuddly just like Kuma-chan! XD
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:iconlunaangel-eclipse:
LunaAngel-Eclipse Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Yup!
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:iconundeadcheshire:
UNDEADCHESHIRE Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Student Artisan Crafter
Its so cool!!!!! Totally something I'd do!
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Hyo38 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

Continues conversation in description

"I don't care that it is an order so GTFO or I will get your younger sister in here."

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DarkEcila Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
 when it said doomed i yelled with hands slightly in the air,"DOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMED DOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMED!"
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:icontreekoi:
Treekoi Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Student General Artist
Oh nu!
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NyanCat001 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Oh gherd!!! If Russia finds out..
Yeah, I'm LITERALLY screwed!! DX
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:iconxenophonxena:
XenophonXena Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013
exactly...
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:icongermanceste:
germanceste Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer

damnit  I wish I had your talent

very good story by the way

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:iconxenophonxena:
XenophonXena Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013
thanks! You'll get me bigheaded!
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:iconrosapretty:
RosaPretty Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013

I don't care weather it was an order Russia you can't bully people

 

lol

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:iconxenophonxena:
XenophonXena Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013
da russia :>
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:iconrosapretty:
RosaPretty Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013
lol
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:icondarkfirequillin:
darkfirequillin Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013
This is AWESOME!   Clap
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:iconxenophonxena:
XenophonXena Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013
ThanQ
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:icondarkfirequillin:
darkfirequillin Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013
Your welcome. I'm just telling what I believe is true
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:icontiniest-monny:
Tiniest-Monny Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Sorry Russia, I'm not becoming one with you. >: D //SHOT

I shall go read the next part nao!
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:iconxenophonxena:
XenophonXena Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013
: D
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:iconcanadiancutie1231:
CanadianCutie1231 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
pwease continue! :3 *puppy eyes*
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:iconxenophonxena:
XenophonXena Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013
the second part is up!
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:iconcanadiancutie1231:
CanadianCutie1231 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
yay! ^^
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RubyTheEspeon00 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013
Pretty good! ^^
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:iconxenophonxena:
XenophonXena Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013
Thanks :>
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siiben Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013
very interesting!!
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:iconxenophonxena:
XenophonXena Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013
thanQ
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Nemurenainda Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Student General Artist
Interesting concept! Though in my opinion, and I'm not quite sure why I think this, I think Russia is a little out of character. He seems to be acting more like Germany here...

I like this story! I would definitely like to see it continued!
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XenophonXena Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013
I guess! Iy's my first russia one since I've done a lot of germany :>
Sorry!
Ans thanks :D
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Nemurenainda Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Student General Artist
No need to apologize! I'm sorry if I came off as rude.
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:iconxenophonxena:
XenophonXena Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013
No, I'm glad for criticism!! I need it :>
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AleItaly1998 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
YESSYESSYESS!continue!!!please!!!
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:iconxenophonxena:
XenophonXena Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013
I will try to! And thankyou for reading :>
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:iconlumikuru1:
Lumikuru1 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You should totally continue this <3
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:iconxenophonxena:
XenophonXena Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013
I shall!
:icononionloveplz:
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xXArtimisXx Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013  Student General Artist
Omg there should be a next part!! Um, that is, if you want to continue it...
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:iconxenophonxena:
XenophonXena Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013
I will try! Sorry for the late reply! (Oh my that rhymes :D)
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:iconxxartimisxx:
xXArtimisXx Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Student General Artist
Okay. :3 (Omg wow... XD)
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FabulousCthulhu Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Professional General Artist
What if your not a country? WHAT IF YOU'RE A CAPITAL OF A COUNTRY. I am. Hehehehe Spain is my daddy.
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XenophonXena Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013
Oh then the capital of the country will be overtook!
:iconevillaughingplz:
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FabulousCthulhu Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Professional General Artist
*nods*
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LocoRoco143 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
YES THIS NEEDS TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I like it alot great grammar and all :3
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:iconxenophonxena:
XenophonXena Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013
Thanks! :iconcblushplz: But I don't know if the last bit is sarcastic or not :>
Is it?
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:iconlocoroco143:
LocoRoco143 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
no i just really like stories with great grammar :p so no it is DEFINITELY NOT sarcastic :D
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